April 7, 2010 by Laila. During our last tutorial, Shane was saying when we write essays, we need to ensure our ideas flow well into each other; to do this effectively transitions should be used. So Shane asked us to write a script and then end it with a transition, then we swapped our scripts with the person sitting beside us and they had to finish it off. My story ended up like this. What do you think? April 7, 2010 by Laila.

Aloha people my name is Suzie and I have created my first ever blog for one of my subjects at University, Analytical Reading and Writing. We are required to make journal entries at least 3 times a week be prepared stay tuned and be on the look out for my entries who knows i may actually educated if not at least entertain some of you. Enough about that lets talk me! March 19, 2010. The art of MetacommentryWeek 3.