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Despite my usual nonchalant behavior i thoroughly enjoyed the class, and since any meaningful way to construct this letter currently escapes me i think dividing it into reviewed sections would be best.

Research Paper for Writing 123. Dentify the focus of the strategy. Mostly to clarify my main thesis and to expand on information provided to support my main thesis. Provide the title of the revision strategy. Provide at least two interesting, surprising, or helpful developments that arose from this exercise. Take some time to project or predict how your essay will be changed as a result of this exercise.

Over the term this course has taught me several methods and tools I can use for future writing. The workload had me a little concerned, but I know have many more skills at my disposal. I appreciate the time you took to help me individually, it was a great help. This weeks revision strategy i chose was reorganizing around thesis and support. This strategy helped relate sections of my essay to my thesis. I had already thought of q.

While facts are fine, I should integrate them in a way that would make this paper more appealing from the beginning. The Declaration of Independence and what it stands for and how it can relate to modern-day terrorism is definitely an attention-grabbing topic. We are a nation founded on life, liberty, an.

There was two main focuses that I had for my revision strategy. The first one is to identify the thesis and the second one was to look at my topic sentence for each paragraph and relate it back to my thesis in some way or another so that the whole paper is tied together and focused around a specific topic. I chose to do the Reorganizing Around Thesis and Support revision strategy for this.

1 The name of the strategy that I did was called beyond Examples. 2 The purpose of this exercise was to present an opposing view, check where my paper needed to have more information and how to make my paper more interesting to my readers.

The drafts really demonstrated my strengths in writing because they showed how I could efficiently finish drafts on time with solid material that could be turned in as a shorter research essay. Thanks once again Monique for helping me through this research essay every step of the way. You truly have played a huge part in making me a more confident writer. Have a terrific summer and I will see you on cam.