The more you read, the more things you will know. Today we have with us, a very special guest; Oliver Ferris, director of the Oscar nominee, Wall Street 3.

Our job was to create an essay of 800-1000 words comparing two characters in the text. How their reactions to events and interactions with others illustrate a major theme of the text. I decided to compare Junior and Victor; here is the second draft.

Being broadcasted form Zurich, but about the world, from everyday social conflicts, to the extreme fatigue ascent to Everest, enjoy! May 13, 2012. This piece was the first piece i wrote of the English 10 year,this is the edited version.

In what ways has my writing improved this year? How have I used ideas, material, and strategies learned in class to improve my writing? How have I improved my writing independently, outside of class? How will I continue to improve my writing in the future? Childhood Memory- Draft 2. Little Pink Ipods- Draft 1. Descriptive paragraph about my small pink ipod, first draft.

Immigration into the European Union Proposal Paper. In Class we have been reading articles about immigration, mainly to Europe. After doing a lot of research on our country of choice, the Netherlands, we wrote a 500 word proposal which was directed to the European Union.

Since August I been working on improving my writing. After comparing old essays and current essays I have concluded some areas in which I have improved. Organization-I have been able to organize my thoughts better in order to make paragraphs more concise and less repetitive.

Pen on Paper and Fingers on Keys. For the final project we had to answer some questions after finishing the editing on our three or four pieces. In what ways has my writing improved this year? How have I used ideas, material, and strategies learned in class to improve my writing? How have I improved my writing independently, outside of class? How will I continue to improve my writing in the future? May 7, 2012. This is the first edition.