After we completed out anamatic we thought it would be a good idea to get some feedback on it. The way we went about this was by asking people what the thought of it and how, in there opinion we could improve. Storylines good but make whats happening clearer. Use a bigger variety of shots. Make sure that it will show movement, develop pace. The idea of the backwards video is a great concept. Range of shot types and editing transitions. The amimatics are an effective and good length.

This will be useful in the exam as an example of synergy as we see the benefits of the two different companies coming together.

Changes I Made To My Thriller Sequence. January 5, 2011 by Faith Adamson. After recieving feedback from my previous sequence, I decided to make a few changes in order to make my thriller meet the typical conventions needed to make a good thriller. In conclusion, these are the main changes I made to the thriller, other than a few cuts to make the scenes flow evenly. I am overall happy with my final product. April 29, 2010 by Faith Adamson. In conclusion, I can definitely see why it is a.

Costume, Props, Setting, Mise-en Scene. Mike Antagonist Mike will be wearing mainly black. This is to hide his identity. This adds a sense of mystery of who he is. Props The Knife The knife tells us that the antagonist brings some danger and makes us wonder what will the knife be used for. We see this knife in the point of view shot at the start and in the kitchen.

We have decided to change our storyline after watching further thriller opening sequences. Our new idea we believe will create more drama, as the opening shots show action, rather than our beginning at the moment having to wait a long time to get into the film.