I think my protagonist does not connect with the audience. They will not be able to feel for the character and understand his emotions and pain. Over use adverbs and adjectives. When in doubt, think nouns and verbs. Run- dart, sprint, race. I hitched a ride to the city on a truck. I thumbed a ride with an army convoy into Miami.

22 I think watching the fireworks with my friends is cooler than watching them with my family. 21 MUSIC and MOVIES, my very source of entertainment apart from cable TV and friends. 19 I know how to go around Orchard Road, Bugis, City Hall, Habourfrount and the works. 17 I used to listen to PERFECT 10.

Ps I have no confidence in my story at all. I think it is really horrible! January 18, 2007. How do we define it? Now why I am not like a typical Singaporean teenager? December 15, 2006.

What makes me a normal Singaporean teenager? I love music. With much thanks to our education system. I enjoy 5 days of school plus 2 days of weekend parties. I hate writing in point form. Yes, I talk in paradoxes. I think the world revolves around me. Yes, I talk in paradoxes. I love my mommy, daddy and my two siblings.

I believe that when you stay in a certain locations of a long period of time, you tend to grow accustom to the habits and mannerism of that particular location. 1 Conveys messages of the story.

Why am I a typical Singaporean teenager. 8211; What is a location? 8211; a physical place. 8211; the place in your story where events occur and characters interact. 8211; a setting and surrounding that interacts with the characters of film by adding importance to their actions. 8211; an environment which impacts the action and heightens the stakes.

In this lesson, we read two story drafts from the previous batch. Wow, one of them have so many BIG words.