Sommers found that student writers were only revising their works at a word or sentence level. The students in her study did not use the revision process to analyze their arguments and the overall themes of their pieces. In our latest readings, the way our w.

Reviewing means just using better words and eliminating words that are not needed. I go over and change words around. When we must revise, when the very idea is subject to recursive shaping by language, then speech becomes inadequate. There are different ways to appeal to an audienc.

Living in the Pacific Northwest with family, friends, fun, food and school. Ethiopian Chicken Stew is a complex, time consuming recipe. Today is the best I have ever cooked this dish. First chop finely about 8 cups of onions. I used combo of yellow and red onions. Cook them on medium low with a half cup of water for about an hour, until cooked down and browning. Then add a small can of tomato paste- 6 oz. Takes a couple hours but it is delicious! Did a new nail des.

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