I think my protagonist does not connect with the audience. They will not be able to feel for the character and understand his emotions and pain. Over use adverbs and adjectives. When in doubt, think nouns and verbs. Run- dart, sprint, race. I hitched a ride to the city on a truck. I thumbed a ride with an army convoy into Miami.

The cat, it is well to remember, remains the friend of man because it pleases him to do so and not because he must. Character, like a photograph, develops in darkness. On January 9, 2007.

Lesson 7 Reflections and Notes. Today for lesson, we had a test first and than we had a normal class. The test was short and sweet, the kind I like. By the end of lesson, I began to ask myself, How do you make a story believable? Does that make sense? To express characters personalities.

When in doubt, think nouns and verbs. 8211; Run dart, sprint, race. 8211; Hit cuff, pummel, brutalize. 8211; Speak chat, mumble, orate. Tell us what people are doing in it. Build energy with parallel constructions.

The story is all about the action.

The Morning of May 29th. I have safley rested during the night in an old abadoned room I found in the upper levels of the castle. The worst thing is that I am running against time. I do not know why she dissapeared.