This also have to do with my sentence structure too, I assume. One of my ways could be to simply instead hastily writing down and getting my words onto the parchment as fast as I can, I could, in fact, slow down and think about my writing before turning it in.

Tuesday, March 13th, 2012. I could have added more support by using stronger words. Saturday, March 3rd, 2012. To do better at this I should use a thesaurus and look up synonyms to weak or overused words. Thursday, February 16th, 2012. Sunday, January 29th, 2012.

Like when your writing something down for instance. In your mind you know what to say and how to spell the words, but on paper you spell the words wrong and you skip some words you were going to write. That makes you have to erase a lot. And try to remember what you were going to say again. Hopefully next week, we will have more writing prompts and more attention-getting ones too! January 28, 2012.

For my Greek analysis essay I think I could have improved my paragraphs by adding more descriptive words. Looking back at my original essay I can tell that I used pretty basic words while writing. With that I am going to try and make my paragraph more interesting my using extraordinary word choice and adding a collosal amount of support.