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AIM 1st Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 9 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 9 Reflection. AIM 1 3rd Hour 1. AIM 3rd Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 9 Reflection.
Due to me not saving it on the computer and my laziness of not typing it again and dinner getting in the way. Please comment on ho that was because in my bifocals it read good to me, but to University High it probably sounds okay.
Thanks for dropping by gracewilliams1! Take a look around and grab the RSS feed. How could you tie those back into the theme of your paper? Once you answer these questions, rewrite that paragraph for us on your blogs and include more support for your main points, and also find a way to tie it back into the overall theme in your paper.
How to create a new blog. Step 1- go to dash board and press my blog. Step 3- follow the steps on the screen that pops up. Finally you can create posts by clicking your username in the upper right corner and going to posts after clicking your user name. So far the new process,that I am having my brother do,is working well. I have been improving my summarizing skills and have.
This also have to do with my sentence structure too, I assume. One of my ways could be to simply instead hastily writing down and getting my words onto the parchment as fast as I can, I could, in fact, slow down and think about my writing before turning it in.
8220;I belong to death. Antigone is entitled to her actions and if such deserved death she is willing to do just that. Doing this will expand my vocabulary and give me better writing techniques in my pocket. I will also be able to have my writings become more realistic and proper.
Tuesday, March 13th, 2012. I could have added more support by using stronger words. Saturday, March 3rd, 2012. To do better at this I should use a thesaurus and look up synonyms to weak or overused words. Thursday, February 16th, 2012. Sunday, January 29th, 2012.
For my Greek analysis essay I think I could have improved my paragraphs by adding more descriptive words. Looking back at my original essay I can tell that I used pretty basic words while writing. With that I am going to try and make my paragraph more interesting my using extraordinary word choice and adding a collosal amount of support.
I think I needed to add some more support and I think that would have made my essay a whole lot better. When answering the question about how I would tie it back into the theme, I would talk about how bold, daring, and brave she was and what he effect of all of that was. The Paragraph I chose was the 3rd Paragraph. Which talks about what happen when Antigone got caught.
In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.
The real 9th week review. Well I can say that this paragraphg was origanaly a summary so there is alot of room for improvement hope you guys like it. This is the second to last pargrapgh of my essay. Should it end with his survival or his death? March 11, 2012.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
For my Greek analysis essay I think I could have improved my paragraphs by adding more descriptive words. Looking back at my original essay I can tell that I used pretty basic words while writing. With that I am going to try and make my paragraph more interesting my using extraordinary word choice and adding a collosal amount of support.
For my Greek literature analysis essay I did not receive the grade I wished, nor thought I deserved, even after rereading it. However, in one of my paragraphs I strongly agree that I could have displayed more support and analysis for my thesis. Within the paragraph that was given the most commentary, the least amount of examples were provided. For example, I keep repeating the theme of the.