Even more so than improving my grammatical skills going back and revising my papers has greatly improved my sentence construction. Such as in my paper about music here is the first sentence;. After going back and revising the paper this was the sentence I chose to replace the first one with;. The second sentence is more.

So far i have been indecisive in terms of picking which essay to revise. The marking rubric is gonna be used as my areas of critique, so i will look at that formula and also at peer, and instructor review when i finally pinpoint the paper i want to use.

These handout were the most hopefully. I feel that if you have a good thesis and follow the checklist of questions on intro, conclusion and body paragraphs you will have written a pretty succesful paper. I found these much more helpful than the other ones. My conclusion is pretty good it seems to answer all the question on the hand out. How and Why to my thesis. I feel that my examples and su.

Please through wants with soul. Feel joy explore this embrace. I liked this poem, because its short, and could really mean anything.

I have yet to start my revision process. I am currently feeling a lot of stress in my other class and feel the need to put a higher priority on my other classes. I have however read the revision hand outs and made a clear plan as to how I am going to revise. Life in the Fast Lane. The topic of drug and alcohol abuse in athletics is covered by Kirstie McLellan Day in her book. After reading the majority of the.

Dark cloudy skies forever haunt. But the promising sun finds me. And gives light to my eternal nights. For paper 4 i was quite clueless until i found out that we could write about something that we are pa.

I was unable to post my paper to my blog before class because my trial of Microsoft Word ran out, and for some reason it would not let me email it to myself or open the file.