Dynamite with a laser beam. The handouts did help me. They gave me a better understanding of what i need to do when i write my papers and after i have written them. This is all i have for.

I felt they have helped me so far. i still have a long way to go on this one. if i looked over my essay without the handouts i wouldnt have really understood as much as i do now. In the warming house, children lace their skates,. Bending, choked, over their thick jackets. A Franklin stove keeps the place so cozy. Clumping across the frozen beach to the river.

Going through the worksheets helped me get a better idea of what to change on my paper. I am usually unaware of what questions to ask when I am editing and revising a paper, so to use external questions is usually very beneficial. I have become aware that I need a more specific thesis and wrap my body paragraphs around the questions that the thesis should produce.

I mean come on! I young man died. Death of a young person is generally an emotionally charged area in any story. Ok, entire talk is trippy as anything.