So far i have been indecisive in terms of picking which essay to revise. The marking rubric is gonna be used as my areas of critique, so i will look at that formula and also at peer, and instructor review when i finally pinpoint the paper i want to use.

Please through wants with soul. Feel joy explore this embrace. I liked this poem, because its short, and could really mean anything.

I have yet to start my revision process. I am currently feeling a lot of stress in my other class and feel the need to put a higher priority on my other classes. I have however read the revision hand outs and made a clear plan as to how I am going to revise. Life in the Fast Lane. The topic of drug and alcohol abuse in athletics is covered by Kirstie McLellan Day in her book. After reading the majority of the.

Going through the worksheets helped me get a better idea of what to change on my paper. I am usually unaware of what questions to ask when I am editing and revising a paper, so to use external questions is usually very beneficial. I have become aware that I need a more specific thesis and wrap my body paragraphs around the questions that the thesis should produce.