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I found following the handouts were a great tool is revising an essay. If I were to look over my essay, without any aids, I certainly would miss a lot of correctable mistakes. When the handouts ask questions you not normally would think of, it allows you to think about new ideas. Along with using the handouts I may use the writing center as a resource as well.