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Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.
Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.
I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
Okay, so I really wanted to write an essay on. This was a fail on my part, for taking a very easy, cliched subject to write it on. A Somewhat Less Lengthy Reflection of the Seventh Week. I absolutely adore changing the voice of my writing.
The characteristics of these people can be explained medically, but is there another solution? More of a reason behind why they think differently from others? To figure out an answer to these questions, I am going to start blogging about my views on the human mind as I discover them. Feel free to add your input or comment on what I come up with.
8220;I belong to death. Antigone is entitled to her actions and if such deserved death she is willing to do just that. Doing this will expand my vocabulary and give me better writing techniques in my pocket. I will also be able to have my writings become more realistic and proper.
Tuesday, March 13th, 2012. I could have added more support by using stronger words. Saturday, March 3rd, 2012. To do better at this I should use a thesaurus and look up synonyms to weak or overused words. Thursday, February 16th, 2012. Sunday, January 29th, 2012.
After you read this, you should delete and write your own post, with a new title above. To start a fresh post. Are some suggestions for your first post. You can find new ideas for what to blog about by reading the Daily Post. It creates a new blog post for you about any interesting page you read on the web. Make some changes to this page.
And if it really is,. Week 3 and My Writing.