I guess it would be convenient to know the theme, too. So, here it is, possibly the most typical, generic, and easily interpreted one of them all for. As compensation for his lost war prize.

Also I would like to use better and more imagery to increase the quality of my writing. But overall I felt good about the writing I put out and I actually used most of the time that was given for us to write with. What i do after school.

This entry was from the setting prompts, and I almost instantly notice a lot of things that I could change and make better. I believe that if I take the time and put more initial thought in to my writing that it could be a lot better than what it is.

I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.

Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.

I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.

This week the writing i have done has been more fun and relaxed, due to our prompts. i believe i have been improving on getting imagery through my writing and have been more detailed. This is my reflection of my week. This is my reflection of my week. My week has been very troublesome. trying to balance the amount of things going on in my family .