The real 9th week review. Well I can say that this paragraphg was origanaly a summary so there is alot of room for improvement hope you guys like it. This is the second to last pargrapgh of my essay. Should it end with his survival or his death? March 11, 2012.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.

For my Greek analysis essay I think I could have improved my paragraphs by adding more descriptive words. Looking back at my original essay I can tell that I used pretty basic words while writing. With that I am going to try and make my paragraph more interesting my using extraordinary word choice and adding a collosal amount of support.

For my Greek literature analysis essay I did not receive the grade I wished, nor thought I deserved, even after rereading it. However, in one of my paragraphs I strongly agree that I could have displayed more support and analysis for my thesis. Within the paragraph that was given the most commentary, the least amount of examples were provided. For example, I keep repeating the theme of the.

I think I needed to add some more support and I think that would have made my essay a whole lot better. When answering the question about how I would tie it back into the theme, I would talk about how bold, daring, and brave she was and what he effect of all of that was. The Paragraph I chose was the 3rd Paragraph. Which talks about what happen when Antigone got caught.