Without his planning and pure intelligence, well we can only imagine what would have happened to him and Telemachus. Odysseus is a truly inspirational character, he was inhumanly bright, used every one of his opponents weaknesses to his advantage, and above all he was determined not only to get home but to be a good leader.

I guess it would be convenient to know the theme, too. So, here it is, possibly the most typical, generic, and easily interpreted one of them all for. As compensation for his lost war prize.

Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.

A lot of the things I said contradicted themselves and my views sort of jumped back and forth. For this week I feel my word choice has been the same as it always has. I can use pretty descriptive words when I actually think about adding them in, but most of the time I use pretty generic words. A lot of the time I feel like this hinders my writing. For this upcoming week I thi.

This entry was from the setting prompts, and I almost instantly notice a lot of things that I could change and make better. I believe that if I take the time and put more initial thought in to my writing that it could be a lot better than what it is.

Published March 12, 2012. I am satisfied with the grade I recieved for my essay. The most beneficial part of essay assignments I believe, is when you look at the graded rubric and essay and analyze the certain weak points. Published February 25, 2012. Published February 12, 2012.

This week I actually kind of like what I wrote.

I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.