WRT 101 Fall 2014 Research. But I already know my topic.

Filed under UAH EH102 Required posts. I need to continue with some definitions and photos etc, grammar needs some revision, but I think I will change some parts to make the paper more coherent if needed.

I felt they have helped me so far. i still have a long way to go on this one. if i looked over my essay without the handouts i wouldnt have really understood as much as i do now. In the warming house, children lace their skates,. Bending, choked, over their thick jackets. A Franklin stove keeps the place so cozy. Clumping across the frozen beach to the river.

These handout were the most hopefully. I feel that if you have a good thesis and follow the checklist of questions on intro, conclusion and body paragraphs you will have written a pretty succesful paper. I found these much more helpful than the other ones. My conclusion is pretty good it seems to answer all the question on the hand out. How and Why to my thesis. I feel that my examples and su.

Please through wants with soul. Feel joy explore this embrace. I liked this poem, because its short, and could really mean anything.

As I looked over my. Paper for revision there are a few things that stick out to me. I often refer to the title of the play and forget to italicize the title. I have talked with Dr. Shattuck on using better verbs in my paper which could make my paper pop a little better. I have several sentences to rewrite so that my paper will flow better because there are issues where my sentences seem to come out of left field.

The handouts on Angel were helpful in the sense that they helped me decide to make my conclusion put my essay in a larger context as opposed to restating my thesis. I think this will make my essay more interesting and at the same time leave the reader with a lasting impression. I have decided to revise essay 4. This was my best paper in this class but there is still more than enough material to revise. I also need to cite.

The story of the Tell-Tale Heart. Ever wonder how the unstable mind works and how to make it the base of a creepy story? Revising Support and Organization. Crazy person kills a creepy old man with creepy eye. Poe reveals every small detail in the killing.

Dark cloudy skies forever haunt. But the promising sun finds me. And gives light to my eternal nights. For paper 4 i was quite clueless until i found out that we could write about something that we are pa.

Does my thesis statement take a stand or make a judgment? Does my thesis statement make the point I want to make? Its along the lines but needs to be refined a bit. All in all my thesis needs to be completely redone to better take a stand on the point and better commumicate the point with a better variety of vived words.