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Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
Also I would like to use better and more imagery to increase the quality of my writing. But overall I felt good about the writing I put out and I actually used most of the time that was given for us to write with. What i do after school.
Due to me not saving it on the computer and my laziness of not typing it again and dinner getting in the way. Please comment on ho that was because in my bifocals it read good to me, but to University High it probably sounds okay.
A lot of the things I said contradicted themselves and my views sort of jumped back and forth. For this week I feel my word choice has been the same as it always has. I can use pretty descriptive words when I actually think about adding them in, but most of the time I use pretty generic words. A lot of the time I feel like this hinders my writing. For this upcoming week I thi.
Now that we are older and we are learning more and more about how to write and how to write effectively, our writing can continue to grow. With the daily prompts and the reflections I feel that my writing is improving and that the more that I write the easier it becomes! I hope to continue on this path and in the weeks to come become a better writer! .
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