Without his planning and pure intelligence, well we can only imagine what would have happened to him and Telemachus. Odysseus is a truly inspirational character, he was inhumanly bright, used every one of his opponents weaknesses to his advantage, and above all he was determined not only to get home but to be a good leader.

Thanks for dropping by emilymt! Take a look around and grab the RSS feed. Mdash; Leave a comment.

This week I actually kind of like what I wrote.

Why did they sidetrack him? How did he get back on track? And how did being sidetracked affect his patience and perseverance throughout his mission. I lacked support in every way possible. This essay was just skin and bones, I needed to fill in the blanks with deep explanations and specific events that happened throughout the course of the novel. Week 5, Third Writing Reflection.

I used key words single word for a larger group of words or whole idea. I also used picture because it is said that a picture is worth 1000 words. This way has worked for me all the time and it has worked stupendously well this week. I fortified what I al.

I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.

This week the writing i have done has been more fun and relaxed, due to our prompts. i believe i have been improving on getting imagery through my writing and have been more detailed. This is my reflection of my week. This is my reflection of my week. My week has been very troublesome. trying to balance the amount of things going on in my family .