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I guess it would be convenient to know the theme, too. So, here it is, possibly the most typical, generic, and easily interpreted one of them all for. As compensation for his lost war prize.
Could you have been more descriptive in your writing? 8220;Sh.
I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.
Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.
I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.
In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
Thanks for dropping by gracewilliams1! Take a look around and grab the RSS feed. How could you tie those back into the theme of your paper? Once you answer these questions, rewrite that paragraph for us on your blogs and include more support for your main points, and also find a way to tie it back into the overall theme in your paper.
Could you have been more descriptive in your writing? 8220;Sh.
O proud left foot, that ventures quick within. Then soon upon a backward journey lithe. Command sinistral pedestal to writhe. Commence thou then the fervid Hokey-Poke,. A mad gyration, hips in wanton swirl. A wilde release from Heavens yoke. Surely canst go, girl. I did my essay on Paris from The Iliad.
How to create a new blog. Step 1- go to dash board and press my blog. Step 3- follow the steps on the screen that pops up. Finally you can create posts by clicking your username in the upper right corner and going to posts after clicking your user name. So far the new process,that I am having my brother do,is working well. I have been improving my summarizing skills and have.
One area I seek improvement is descriptive words, particularly when involving the fictional genre. My stance on word choice, as stated above, oftentimes will leave my writing, specifically fiction, a tad on the bland side. Ergo I shall quest after a balance between the professional and the descriptive.