Also I would like to use better and more imagery to increase the quality of my writing. But overall I felt good about the writing I put out and I actually used most of the time that was given for us to write with. What i do after school.

A lot of the things I said contradicted themselves and my views sort of jumped back and forth. For this week I feel my word choice has been the same as it always has. I can use pretty descriptive words when I actually think about adding them in, but most of the time I use pretty generic words. A lot of the time I feel like this hinders my writing. For this upcoming week I thi.

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Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.

I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.

In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.