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AIM 1st Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 1st Hr Week 9 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 2nd Hr Week 9 Reflection. AIM 1 3rd Hour 1. AIM 3rd Hr Week 2 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 5 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 7 Reflection. AIM 3rd Hr Week 9 Reflection.
Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.
Also I would like to use better and more imagery to increase the quality of my writing. But overall I felt good about the writing I put out and I actually used most of the time that was given for us to write with. What i do after school.
A lot of the things I said contradicted themselves and my views sort of jumped back and forth. For this week I feel my word choice has been the same as it always has. I can use pretty descriptive words when I actually think about adding them in, but most of the time I use pretty generic words. A lot of the time I feel like this hinders my writing. For this upcoming week I thi.
Published March 12, 2012. I am satisfied with the grade I recieved for my essay. The most beneficial part of essay assignments I believe, is when you look at the graded rubric and essay and analyze the certain weak points. Published February 25, 2012. Published February 12, 2012.
I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.
Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.
I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.
In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.
This also have to do with my sentence structure too, I assume. One of my ways could be to simply instead hastily writing down and getting my words onto the parchment as fast as I can, I could, in fact, slow down and think about my writing before turning it in.
Why did they sidetrack him? How did he get back on track? And how did being sidetracked affect his patience and perseverance throughout his mission. I lacked support in every way possible. This essay was just skin and bones, I needed to fill in the blanks with deep explanations and specific events that happened throughout the course of the novel. Week 5, Third Writing Reflection.
The characteristics of these people can be explained medically, but is there another solution? More of a reason behind why they think differently from others? To figure out an answer to these questions, I am going to start blogging about my views on the human mind as I discover them. Feel free to add your input or comment on what I come up with.
8220;I belong to death. Antigone is entitled to her actions and if such deserved death she is willing to do just that. Doing this will expand my vocabulary and give me better writing techniques in my pocket. I will also be able to have my writings become more realistic and proper.
Tuesday, March 13th, 2012. I could have added more support by using stronger words. Saturday, March 3rd, 2012. To do better at this I should use a thesaurus and look up synonyms to weak or overused words. Thursday, February 16th, 2012. Sunday, January 29th, 2012.