Because of his self-centeredness, Creon makes poor decisions. Although many other characters in the story of. Care a lot about Creon, he seems to care for no one but himself. Any and all choices he makes solely revolve around him and generally only do any good for him, sometimes they even come off as vicious. Thou canst never marry her, on this side of the grave. Over the last few weeks.

Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.

This week I actually kind of like what I wrote.

I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.

I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.

In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.

I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.