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Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.
Could you have been more descriptive in your writing? 8220;Sh.
One area I seek improvement is descriptive words, particularly when involving the fictional genre. My stance on word choice, as stated above, oftentimes will leave my writing, specifically fiction, a tad on the bland side. Ergo I shall quest after a balance between the professional and the descriptive.
I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.
In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
This week the writing i have done has been more fun and relaxed, due to our prompts. i believe i have been improving on getting imagery through my writing and have been more detailed. This is my reflection of my week. This is my reflection of my week. My week has been very troublesome. trying to balance the amount of things going on in my family .
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This week I noticed that I had been graded down for not answering the questions that had been for after we had written the prompt. I was very shocked by this because I had thought thay it was just for. We had the time because that is what some of them stated. But, I now have learned that I am meant to answer those questions and need to take tetime. On February 29, 2012 in Uncategorized. On February 13, 2012 in Reflections.
Think about the language in your writing this week.
Also I would like to use better and more imagery to increase the quality of my writing. But overall I felt good about the writing I put out and I actually used most of the time that was given for us to write with. What i do after school.
Due to me not saving it on the computer and my laziness of not typing it again and dinner getting in the way. Please comment on ho that was because in my bifocals it read good to me, but to University High it probably sounds okay.
A lot of the things I said contradicted themselves and my views sort of jumped back and forth. For this week I feel my word choice has been the same as it always has. I can use pretty descriptive words when I actually think about adding them in, but most of the time I use pretty generic words. A lot of the time I feel like this hinders my writing. For this upcoming week I thi.