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Without his planning and pure intelligence, well we can only imagine what would have happened to him and Telemachus. Odysseus is a truly inspirational character, he was inhumanly bright, used every one of his opponents weaknesses to his advantage, and above all he was determined not only to get home but to be a good leader.
Essay, I felt as if I had a lot of material to work with, and I could use artistic language to amplify my point.
Could you have been more descriptive in your writing? 8220;Sh.
This week I actually kind of like what I wrote.
I mean I stuck with my theme but it had nothing to do with my actual thesis.
Words, Where Are You When I Need You? March 13, 2012.
I actually was fairly satisfied with the way my essay turned out, especially with using lots of examples . Of course, there is always something you can improve on. I probably could have improved on tying in examples to the theme. Just so you know, my essay is about how Ismene is used in Antigone to make a point about the importance of sticking up for your beliefs. Sunday, Feb 26 2012. Sunday, Feb 12 2012.
In order to improve my paragraph, I included another example that relates to the topic. Reflection on My Week One Writing.
I could have added more supports and examples by writing down a PIE chart for this essay. I would probably have more sufficient points and examples. The problem I think I had with tying my thoughts into the actual theme of the story was that I really never focused on the theme itself. It is evident I was more worried about my word choice rather than incorporating the theme into my writing. I noticed in my composition books my spelling was not the best.
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The site had the following in the homepage, "Published March 12, 2012." I noticed that the web site stated " I am satisfied with the grade I recieved for my essay." They also stated " I know that writing is my weakest subject but doing the best I could do with this essay, the grade I saw was in a positive way shocking for myself because I expected lower. The most beneficial part of essay assignments I believe, is when you look at the graded rubric and essay and analyze the certain weak points. Published February 25, 2012. Published February 12, 2012."ANALYZE MORE BUSINESSES
This week I actually kind of like what I wrote.
This also have to do with my sentence structure too, I assume. One of my ways could be to simply instead hastily writing down and getting my words onto the parchment as fast as I can, I could, in fact, slow down and think about my writing before turning it in.
Why did they sidetrack him? How did he get back on track? And how did being sidetracked affect his patience and perseverance throughout his mission. I lacked support in every way possible. This essay was just skin and bones, I needed to fill in the blanks with deep explanations and specific events that happened throughout the course of the novel. Week 5, Third Writing Reflection.
The characteristics of these people can be explained medically, but is there another solution? More of a reason behind why they think differently from others? To figure out an answer to these questions, I am going to start blogging about my views on the human mind as I discover them. Feel free to add your input or comment on what I come up with.
8220;I belong to death. Antigone is entitled to her actions and if such deserved death she is willing to do just that. Doing this will expand my vocabulary and give me better writing techniques in my pocket. I will also be able to have my writings become more realistic and proper.